Hi Joseph,I really like how you wrote about your crazy pet.Here is some feedback your little I need to be capital and it doesn't really make sense.Hopefully you take that feedback well.Over all it is a great story.
Malo e lelei Sifa I like your story because it is interesting. Next time when you are writing make sure you read through your story so that it makes sense. Keep up the great work!!
Good Work sifa for the blog post I bet your parents will be surprised. Perfect twist at the end sifa I like it because the cat was watching netflix. Keep the Good work up. SIFA \
Hi Sifa, I like how you said at the end that you saw a cat and you were watching netflix too. Good Job Sifa.
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DeleteNice story Sifa, I found it interesting when you said the cat was watching Netflix, try fixing your mistakes too.
ReplyDeleteHi Joseph,I really like how you wrote about your crazy pet.Here is some feedback your little I need to be capital and it doesn't really make sense.Hopefully you take that feedback well.Over all it is a great story.
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Sifa I like your story because it is interesting. Next time when you are writing make sure you read through your story so that it makes sense. Keep up the great work!!
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Good Work sifa for the blog post I bet your parents will be surprised. Perfect twist at the end sifa I like it because the cat was watching netflix. Keep the Good work up. SIFA \
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